My Dream Land~
My dream land is anything you could possibly imagine. It has candy castles and candy fountains of course! oh i forgot to tell you about the furniture soft fluffy white beds! And even stripey pink marsh mellow sofa's. And chocolate cabinets well the whole kitchen is chocolate!.I mean like what else could you possible imagine?.Its everything ill ever need that i for sure.Anyways even the guards of the village! chocolate chest plates and even tall marsh mellow hats! and GIANT lollipop swords! how could this place get better especially the houses!.White chocolate mansions with HUGE! backyards and obviously there's other houses and mansions for other people to find a home for their family or just them selves.There are shops and of course if you get sick of candy there's all the OTHER delicious foods including candy of course. We cant forget the chocolate river that runs through the backyard with the candy trees running along the fence line. And thee marsh mellow dogs and cats.My dream is a kind,caring,fun,loving land! The end~ 🍓🍥🍧
Love your writing about your dream land Brooke, especially those pink, stripy, marshmallow couches. Remember to reread your story over again when you are done, so that you can fill in your punctuation marks and capital letters. Well done Brooke
ReplyDeleteI love your description of each item you would have. Great writing
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Sweet candy and delicious food makes you feel all the happiness inside. Keep up the good writing Brooke. :)
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